写作虽然在中考英语各个板块(听力、阅读、语法、写作)中所占比重不是最大,却是一个学生英语学习能力的综合体现,也是拉开中考英语总分差距的重要一环。
然而,很多宝宝在英语作文写作中,一想到“好”,就是“good”;一想到“坏”,就是“bad”;一想到“美丽”就是“beautiful”。
当老师一天批阅上千份“内容相同、用词相似”的作文时,他的痛苦感受可想而知。
那么,怎样才能写出一篇亮丽出彩、能快速博得阅卷老师好感的作文呢?
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想要拿到高分作文,主要有以下三种方式:
使用高级词汇来替换我们熟悉的低级词汇,让作文的文采提升,例如good→ fantastic, amazing;sad→ depressed, upset.
其中,用词需注意3原则:
①标新立异
Eg:比较级+and+比较级,表“越来越……”,more and more
the+比较级(+主+谓),the+比较级(+主+谓),表“越……越……”,the more……,the better……
②短语优先
Eg:should do sth. = be supposed to do sth. 应该做……
shouldn't = be not supposed to do sth. 不应该做……
③避免重复
Eg:I think → in my opinion, in my point of view , as far as I am concerned
使用高级句式,让句子靓起来。
①避免重复句式
Eg:First, we should save the water, the paper, the food and so on. Second, we should protect the trees and plant more trees.
抢分句型:First, we should save the water, the paper, the food and so on. Second, it is more important for us to protect the trees and plant more trees.
②将单句变成复合句
Eg: I should look after myself. And I should pay attention to my family and friends.
抢分句型:Not only should I look after myself, but also I should pay attention to my family and friends.
细读例句,熟悉相关词汇与句式的用法。
相信通过以上的课程学习,相信大家对中考作文已经胸有成竹了,赶紧在接下来的时间里练习起来吧。让我们一起期待下一次的学习干货分享喔!